Tuesday, February 18, 2014

Tuesday

Sample personal experience essays: http://www.infoplease.com/edu/collegebound/applying/lesson1_significant.html

Class Work

1. Commas, commas, commas . . . it is time to use them correctly.

 http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/powerpoint.htm 

Take notes!

http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/quiz_list.htm



#80, 81, 82 ,83 


HOMEWORK:  Complete the comma exercises in MyCompLab.

2. First lines . . .

http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/intros.htm 




Sample first lines . . . what do you think? 


1.       Title:  Join the Flock
First line:  A year ago, I had no idea what a PLN was.
2.       Title:  Seeking a Drinking Age Debate: Perspectives from an Amethyst Initiative Signatory About Moving the Dialog Forward
First line:  As an enthusiastic signatory to the Amethyst Initiative, a joint statement issued by college and university presidents and chancellors urging public debate on the National Minimum Drinking Age Act, I am pleased to say the discussion is certainly underway.
3.       Title: Yes, People Still Read, but Now It’s Social
First line: “THE POINT of books is to combat loneliness, David Foster Wallace observes near the beginning of “Although of Course You End Up Becoming Yourself,” David Lipsky’s recently published, book-length interview with him.

4.       Title: Terror on YouTube: the Internet’s Most popular Sites Are Becoming Tools for Terrorist Recruitment
First line: Since its creation, the Internet has been viewed as a symbol of democracy and free speech, a tool for communicating, networking, and learning.


3.  One more time: Claims, reasons, evidence - Create a chart in class.


HOMEWORK: Write the introduction to your essay. (Hot Topics) Post in MyCompLab. (25 pts. )

Pay special attention to the first line. State your claim!


Thursday, February 13, 2014

Thursday

Class Work

Avoiding run-on sentences and comma splices.


1. Pass a quick quiz on run-on sentence and comma splices.
     A. On the bottom of the quiz, identify FANBOYS. Tell how to use them to connect two independent clauses (sentences).

      B. In addition, explain how to use CONJUNCTIVE ADVERBS (snob words) to connect two independent clauses (sentences).

     C. Explain how semi-colons and independent clauses work together to help you avoid run-on sentences.

     D. Explain one more "obvious" way to avoid run-on sentences when writing two independent clauses.



2. Using statistics




https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/672/01/

UNC - Good informaiton: http://writingcenter.unc.edu/handouts/statistics/


Let's take a look at two charts. What do you see? (Scroll down)





Work with a partner and select a chart or graph from https://www.google.com/search?q=summarizing+charts+and+tables&client=firefox&hs=lQb&rls=com.yahoo:en-US:official&tbm=isch&tbo=u&source=univ&sa=X&ei=_6v8Upr6K-emygHss4GwCQ&ved=0CCYQsAQ&biw=1920&bih=916 . Write a paragraph summarizing the information presented.

Post the chart and the summary in CANVAS. Be sure that both names appear on the document.  Be sure that the chart and summary appear by both names in CANVAS.

When writing an essay, it is not enough to say, "See Chart #1." You need to provide guidance for the reader by writing a summary that points out the information that helps you prove your point.

Post the chart and the summary in CANVAS. Be sure that both names appear on the document.

http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/brainstorm_clustering.htm

Homework: Find a graph or chart that relates to your hot topic. Post the graph or chart. Explain in a paragraph or two what the visual shows. Slant your interpretation to your point-of-view on the topic.
Let's manipulate numbers.

  • Make a small number appear to be larger.
  • Make a large number appear to be smaller.



Homework

Read the article at http://caps-report-presentation-marois.wikispaces.umb.edu/file/view/with%20these%20words.pdf/453103872/with%20these%20words.pdf (This article is slow to load.)

or
http://www.tdchristian.ca/classes/english/10/English10%20Westerhof/Advertising/Weasel%20Words%20Article.pdf (This is the same article, but it is not very pretty!)

This is an article about "weasel words." Summarize the article. (One page.) Post in Canvas.

Tuesday, February 11, 2014

Tuesday, 2/11/14

Class Work

1. What topics did you select? Write your final choice on the board.
2. Join others with similar topic to discuss what you found and posted in CANVAS.
  • What are the causes of the topic?
  • Is there a history associated with the topic?
  • Are there solutions?
  • What points of interest did you discover?
Feel free to share sources with the group.
What side of the topic do you support?

4. You will be using the power of argumentative writing to convince the readers of your stance. Logic matters! http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/argument.htm

You found some sources. Now it is time to think of a time when this topic directly related to you. You will be writing a personal experience segment.

Personal Essays: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/personal.htm

http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/narrative.htm Sample essay.

Tell your story as it relates to your topic. Add direct quotations. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/quotation.htm

5. Back to run-on sentences . . . we really did not have time on Thursday to clarify issues.

Sample quizzes: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/quiz_list.htm
#s: 59, 60, 61, 73, 75, 76

Practice some more! http://www.bucks.edu/media/bcccmedialibrary/pdf/AvoidingRun-OnsCommaSplicesFragmentsJuly08.pdf (p. 5)

Conjunctive Adverbs will help! http://www.chompchomp.com/terms/conjunctiveadverb.htm

http://grammar.yourdictionary.com/parts-of-speech/adverbs/list-of-conjunctive-adverbs.html

http://web.cn.edu/kwheeler/documents/conjunctive_adverbs.pdf

Homework

Write a personal experience narrative. The story must relate to your chosen topic. Post your story in MyCompLab. Be sure to include narration - quotations. (25 pts.) 

Thursday, February 6, 2014

February 6, 2014 - Thursday

Class Work

1. Homework review:

  • What presidential speech did you read? What claims did the president make? Did the president provide enough proof to convince you? Overall, was the speech memorable and/or effective?
  • What are the "hot topics" of our time? List your favorite on the small white board.
2. Persuasive techniques - What do companies do to separate you from your money?
Top 10 Magazine Ads: http://www.themost10.com/10-most-effective-magazine-ads/


 3.Work with a partner to discuss the techniques used in any two of the ads found at: https://www.google.com/search?q=magazine+ads&rls=com.microsoft:en-us&tbm=isch&tbo=u&source=univ&sa=X&ei=ZJ7zUvP6MYOCogTezIHwAw&ved=0CCYQsAQ&biw=1024&bih=605

4. You will be given a magazine ad. Study it. List and explain the techniques used to persuade you to purchase the product or service. You may refer back to the list on Tuesday's blog. Also, identify the target audience and explain how you know that is the audience. 

5. Let's get rid of those pesky run-on sentences. Here's how! http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/powerpoint.htm

Solution #1: 
 Let's meet the FANBOYS! They are a wonderful group of words designed to connect words and independent clauses (sentences). However, since sentences are usually bigger than words, they must call for help! Also, meet the powerful comma, a multifaceted punctuation mark!

Solution #2: Semicolons alone

Solution #3: Semicolons with conjunctive adverbs/(Snob words), and commas

Solution #4: Write two sentences instead on one on-and-on sentence.

In class, you will be writing sentences that demonstrate your ability to correctly use all four solutions!

Homework

Read books, newspapers,magazines, or on-line articles, and locate a sentence that is an example of each run-on solution. Post in CANVAS. Provide a Works Cited entry at the end to show me where you found the sentences. The sentences may come from one or more sources. 25 pts.

A. Pick a topic from the top 10 list. 
B. Read three articles about the topic. 
C. Answer the following questions:
  • What are the pros and cons of the topic? 
  • What are the problems? 
  • What questions exist? 
  • Are there answers? (Think of problems and solutions.) 
D. Now, explain why you are interested in the topic. (paragraph) 

E. Post a Works Cited page to show what articles you read. 

F. Was one article more powerful than the other two? Explain why or why not. Post in Canvas. (50 pts.)





Tuesday, February 4, 2014

Tuesday, February 4, 2014

Class Work

1. How did you like the ads that were aired during the Super Bowl? Favorites? Why? Dislikes? Why?


  •   Anna Quindlen, a Newsweek writer discusses another "anti" campaign. Read the article and look for the following:
    • The thesis/claim(s) Answer, "What's the message or what's the point?"  after reading the entire article. Do you agree or disagree with the position or stance?
    • Reasons 
    • Evidence
    • What argumentative strategies stand out in the piece? Is this a compelling argument?
    • Are larger points presented? Did the larger points hinder or help to convince you?
    • Did the article dismiss or ignore other points of view? Why or why not?
  •  Please work in a group of at least two so that you can discuss the essay.
This is the link to the persuasive techniques. Please read over the list before Thursday.

http://medialiteracyproject.org/language-persuasion
 

For Homework:

Read an inauguration speech from any president of your choosing. What techniques are used? Explain in one or two paragraphs on Canvas and be reading to share what you found in class on Tuesday. Be sure to identify the president and note if this was the first term or second term speech. It makes a difference! Due Thursday.

Make a list of 10 possible topics for use in a persuasive essay. What is currently in the news? What are you reading on the web? What does talk radio go on and on about? What are your friends and family discussing? Post on Canvas. Due Thursday.

Thursday, January 30, 2014

Thursday - January 30, 2014

Class Work

For homework you were to:

Write an essay in three parts: 
  1. Introduction - Start making your point from the beginning!
  2. Body Paragraphs
  3. Conclusion
  4. Works Cited page (Import from EasyBib for ease of formatting.) (This is not part of your essay, but it is required.
Resources include:
  • Personal body art story
  • Interview
  • Research notes
  • Notes from the presentations
  • All of the above need to be documented in the Works Cited page. You also need to give credit within the paper by using in-text citations. We will work on this today. For now, underline or highlight everything within your draft that you borrowed from someone or somewhere else. 
  • Examples from life - It this is a personal story, you are the source, so you do not need to add yourself to the Works Cited page.
    Post your draft in MyCompLab by the beginning of class on Thursday. Also, bring a paper copy to class.

    I. You will be given a note card. Write your name on the top of the note card. Next, write your claim. It answers the question, "What's your point?"
    2. Now, describe your audience. Tell who they are and why they need to know the information. Are they on your side, or do they need to change their minds and join your side?
    3. Get with a small group of authors who have the same color note card. You will read your draft to the class. They will listen and ask you questions. They will tell you what they like about your draft. They will also give you suggestions.

    II. How to use in-text citations . . .
    https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/02/
    http://bcs.bedfordstmartins.com/resdoc5e/res5e_ch08_s1-0001.html

    Here is a sample essay:
    http://www.dianahacker.com/pdfs/hacker-daly-mla.pdf

    III. Look back at your borrowed information. Add the in-text citations.

    For homework, 

    1. Finish the Diagnostic Test in MyCompLab if you have not done so already.
    2. Revise your draft. Post the final copy in MyCompLab. Bring the peer editing sheets to class with you on Tuesday to submit. The final copy is due on Tuesday. We will begin a new unit then.
    3. Watch the Superbowl commercials. Note your favorite. If you do not see the game, look for the commercials on-line. They will be posted! 




    Tuesday, January 28, 2014

    January 28, 2014 - Tuesday

    Class Work

    Did you learn anything interesting when conducting the "body art" interviews?
    Was any of the information surprising?
    Did the person you interviewed agree or disagree with you?

    Consider the following:

    What is your topic?
    What point are you trying to make?
    Who needs to know? (This is your audience.)
    What information is likely to convince your audience to agree with you?
    What objections might they have?
    What questions might they need answered?
    What facts do you have that will help with your argument?

    What do you claim?
    What are your reasons?
    What evidence can you use?

    This is what you will be doing in your essay.

    For homework, write the draft of your essay. Let's focus on introductions along with the claim, reasons, and evidence. This will be posted in MyCompLab
    http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/intros.htm
    http://writingcenter.unc.edu/handouts/introductions/

    Sample introductory paragraphs - select the best one.
    http://students.berkeley.edu/apa/personalstatement/introductions.html
    More samples: Handout - too!
    http://www.irsc.edu/uploadedFiles/Students/AcademicSupportCenter/WritingLab/Introductory_Paragraphs.pdf

     Tips ...This is an essay in three parts:
    1. Introduction - Start making your point from the beginning!
    2. Body Paragraphs
    3. Conclusion
    4. Works Cited page (Import from EasyBib for ease of formatting.)
    Resources include:
    • Personal body art story
    • Interview
    • Research notes
    • Notes from the presentations
    • Examples from life
      Post your draft in MyCompLab by the beginning of class on Thursday. Also, bring a paper copy to class.

      Homework

      Let's get going on MyCompLab . . .

      Sign in.
      You will see that there are two assignments. The  body art draft is due on Thursday. You have until next Tuesday to complete the diagnostic test. However, you will probably have time today in class to get started. Who knows - you just might finish!