Wednesday, February 28, 2018

.february 28, 2018 - Wednesday

Class Work

1. Return to your group. Determine the order of speaking. Everyone must talk. If you speak about your own slides, you know the information! Speak up. We need to hear you. DO NOT read from the screen behind you. Face the class. You will have to stand by the main computer. I do not have a remote clicker.

2. Take notes on the presentations. (Handout provided) (25 points)
Groups:
A. Nail Art
B. Clothing (hats)
C. Tattoos (A)
D. Tattoos (B)
E. Piercings
F. Make-up


3. Conduct Interviews (50 points)
Find someone to interview on the topic of Body Art. You may focus on the topic you selected for your PowerPoint or Prezi, or you may talk about body art in general.

You will conduct two interviews. 
A. Practice with another student in the room. Find the student who shares your number. (Number provided)
B. Conduct the more formal interview with someone outside of this class. Let's generate a list of possibilities. (Class discussion.) 

Here is some information about conducting interviews:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4eOynrI2eTM Tips for Interviewing
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9RjxqXAT9Jc Writing Questions

Here are the instructions:
1.Create five questions to ask. Avoid "yes/no" questions. Avoid leading questions. Do use open-ended questions.  
2. . Ask for permission to use the person's name in your presentation.
3. . Get the correct spelling of the name.
4.. Note the date and location of the interview. If you decide to conduct an interview via text, e-mail, or phone, please note that.
5.. Post your interview results in CANVAS. (25 points for composing excellent questions/25 points for posting the answers to the questions. Do your best to get the interviewee to talk. Feel free to rephrase the question if you are not getting elaborated answers. ) 

Persuasive Techniques- Assignment #2 Save for Friday

Advertisers want to get you to spend your money of their product or service. Politicians want you to give your vote to them. Writers and speakers want you to believe their words and agree with them and possibly support them with time, energy, and money.  No matter what one is selling, the speaker or writer uses several well known and well used techniques.


 After reviewing the information about persuasive techniques, you are now ready to watch and review some ads. You will see the most expensive advertising on television during the Super Bowl.  Your assignment is to select any three ads from any year. Sometimes those voted the worst are actually quite entertaining!

Here is a link: http://www.cbssports.com/nfl/news/2017-super-bowl-commercials-watch-the-latest-leaked-ads-best-and-worst-of-all-time/
  and



1) Identify the product
2) In a sentence or two, describe the ad.
3) Identify the persuasive techniques used.
4) Identify the target audience. A target audience can be identified by, among other items, age, health, and wealth. Also, is the ad geared to people who already use the product or service, or is it aimed at new customers?
5) Explain if you think the ad was effective and tell why or why not. The bottom line is: Will this ad make people spend their money?

Post in Canvas. (30 points)

Week #3 - Assignment #3 - Politics (Save for Friday)

Read an inauguration address from any president of your choosing.
  • What persuasive techniques are used?
  • Use the lists from the links at Assignment #2. 
  • Write a brief essay, up to two pages but no shorter than one, and identify the techniques. Explain if the techniques are effective. (This is your opinion. Justify with evidence from the address.)  Be sure to identify the president, date, and note if this was the first term or second term address. It makes a difference! Did the President seem to be speaking to a friendly audience, or was he speaking to the voters who supported the other candidate? Perhaps he was addressing both audiences? How could you tell? What did he say that convinced you of the audience?

This will be a challenge, but do not use first person point of view in this essay. That means to avoid phrases such as "I think. I feel. I know. I believe." Your writing will be more powerful in third person.

Here is a link to the addresses: http://homeofheroes.com/presidents/inaugural/index.html

If you don't see your favorite, Google it.  In addition, some of the later speeches are on YouTube. Watch and listen if you like.

(60 points)

Week #3 - Assignment #4 - Readings
. "With These Words, I Can Sell Anything" by William Lutz
https://12ap.wikispaces.com/file/view/with+these+words.pdf

This essay explains the use of "weasel words" in advertising. Read the essay and answer questions 1, 2, and 4.

"The World of Doublespeak" by William Lutz
 http://www.cusd80.com/cms/lib6/AZ01001175/Centricity/Domain/318/The%20World%20of%20Doublespeak-William%20Lutz.pdf Answer the following questions:
  • Questions on meaning: 1, 2, 3, 4
  • Questions on writing strategy: 1 & 2
  • Questions on language 1 & 3
  • Read "William Lutz on Writing" Answer question #1 OR #2.
(60 points)

Monday, February 26, 2018

February 26, 2018 - Monday

Class Work

1. All about PowerPoint - Learn the tips of the trade!


Also see the handout, listen, take notes, and ask questions.

Return to your group and continue. This is the assignment. We will present on Wednesday. You have 45 minutes to work together today. Be sure you can contact each other outside of class to polish the final product if you do not finish in class today.

Group Presentation: 
Mini Research Project (60 points)

Body art is much more than tattoos and piercings. It also includes hair design, nail design, make up, clothing to include shoes and hats, and a variety of body modification techniques.  Sometimes body art is a way to improve one's appearance. Other forms create a history on the skin of honors earned.  

  1. tattoos
  2. hair design
  3. piercings
  4. body modifications
  5. clothing/fashion design/shoes/hats
  6. make-up.( War paint counts!)
  7. Nail art (toes and fingers)
Select one of the topics listed above.Sign up to work with a group. Write your name under the topic. Topics are listed on the board.  Groups are from two to four members.

Conduct a quick Internet search and look for the history and progression of your topic. 
Answer these questions. They will guide your research.
     A. Where did it begin?
     B. Why was it done?
     C. Did age have anything to do with the "ritual?" Was it a ritual? Was it just for entertainment or fun?
     D. How was it done? What were the materials/tools that were used?
     E. What did it look in the past and what does it like today?  How has it changed over the years? (Consider using  a time-line for this.)

Prepare one or two slides or bubbles for each question.
  • Prepare a brief document  in PowerPoint or Prezi format. If you don't know how to use either, I suggest PowerPoint. It is like a coloring book for adults. Here is a link to instructions, but I think you can just play with it a bit and figure it out. If you prefer Prezi, that is fine with me, but I can't offer much in the way of instructions as I rarely create with it.  However, feel free if that is your thing. https://computers.tutsplus.com/tutorials/powerpoint-101-everything-you-need-to-make-a-basic-presentation--cms-19541 or  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MjcO2ExtHso
  • Keep track of your sources. Create a Works Cited page. This will be your final slide or bubble. (Revision: Just use the URL and/or title.) 
  • The first slide must contain the title of your presentation and the names of all group members. 
  • When finished, post the PowerPoint or Prezi in CANVAS. You should have up to 11 slides including the Works Cited slide.
  • Only ONE person from your group posts the entire project. The others just write the name of the person who posted for the group. 

We will present on Wednesday. You have 45 minutes to work today. Consider using Google Docs to coordinate work outside of class.

2. Tips for presentations:
Also view the handout, take notes, ask questions, and prepare accordingly.

3. Personal Body Art memoir - table sharing 
A. Read your memoir to the others at your table. (Person closest to the door reads first. Go counter-clockwise around the table.

Listen for:
1. Setting: Could you visualize where and when this event took place?
2. Characters: Were there at least two but no more than four characters introduced in the story?
3. Was there dialogue?
4. Was the story told in the past tense?
5. Did the author avoid the use of second person point of view? 
6. What was strong about the story?
7. What questions do you still have?
8. What is the message? What was the "lesson learned?"


Revision:  Write the final copy of your memoir. Post in CANVAS. It is due Wednesday. 

4. GUM tips - Run-ons, comma splices, and fragments


Practice:


Also, meet the FANBOYS and SNOBS




Thursday, February 22, 2018

February 23, 2018 - Friday

Good News - we are now on CANVAS. All remaining assignments will be submitted electronically unless clearly noted.

Class Work

1. Take a moment to find our class on CANVAS. Upload of picture of YOU to show there. A few of you already did this - probably for another course. You already have 25 points! Good for you! If you know how to upload the picture, please help the others at your table. This is an easy "A".

2. Submit your essay. Place the peer editing sheet on the bottom. Place the final copy on top. Staple.

3. Let's talk about the readings . . . then submit your work. I would like to hear a few volunteers share their letters.

4. EasyBib is your friend. If you have ever had a war with your Works Cited page, you are going to LOVE this site. It does all of the work for you IF you push all of the right buttons. Let's work together. Go to  http://www.easybib.com/ 

Follow along. You will be creating a practice Works Cited page that has three sources.

1. A web site about body art
2. A fellow student (Pretend you interviewed the student.)
3. A YouTube video about body art

You will create a Word Document. Then you will copy/paste it into CANVAS. Let me see your work BEFORE you hit the submit button. (30 points)

5. Group Presentation: 
Mini Research Project (60 points)

Body art is much more than tattoos and piercings. It also includes hair design, nail design, make up, clothing to include shoes and hats, and a variety of body modification techniques.  Sometimes body art is a way to improve one's appearance. Other forms create a history on the skin of honors earned. 

  1. tattoos
  2. hair design
  3. piercings
  4. body modifications
  5. clothing/fashion design/shoes/hats
  6. make-up.( War paint counts!)
  7. Nail art (toes and fingers)
Select one of the topics listed above.Sign up to work with a group. Write your name under the topic. Topics are listed on the board.  Groups are from two to four members.

Conduct a quick Internet search and look for the history and progression of your topic. Keep track of your sources on EasyBib!
Answer these questions. They will guide your research.
     A. Where did it begin?
     B. Why was it done?
     C. Did age have anything to do with the "ritual?" Was it a ritual? Was it just for entertainment or fun?
     D. How was it done? What were the materials/tools that were used?
     E. What did it look in the past and what does it like today?  How has it changed over the years? (Consider using  a time-line for this.)

Prepare one or two slides or bubbles for each question.
On EasyBib, do create a user name and sign in. The site does NOT send anything to you. Do remember the user name and password that you create. You do not have to give your real name. You do have to provide a real e-mail address.
  • When finished, post the PowerPoint or Prezi in CANVAS. You should have up to 11 slides including the Works Cited slide.
  • The last slide will be a Works Cited slide (Three to five sources are required. Do not use Wikipedia.)
We will present on Monday. (Wednesday)You have 45 minutes to work today. Consider using Google Docs to coordinate work over the weekend.

Personal Body Art Story
1. Study the rules for writing dialogue
 https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/577/01/

and http://theeditorsblog.net/2010/12/08/punctuation-in-dialogue/

You will need to include dialogue in the personal narrative you will write.

2. Now, think of a a personal Body Art story. Perhaps you have a tattoo or piercing. If so, you could write about the getting it. If you don't have tattoos or piercings, you have probably done something "interesting" with your hair. Perhaps you tried a new style or color that was either wonderful or was just plain awful. Share that experience. Maybe you designed an awesome Halloween costume. Maybe you showed up to a party in formal attire only to discover that it was an informal event. Whatever it is, share the story.

  • Identify the characters
  • Explain the before and after of the event
  • Quote people- what was said?
  • Create the setting. Where did the event occur?
  • Explain the reactions of those who saw the result.
  • Be a good story teller!
Tips for writing:
 3. Write the draft. It should be about two pages long.The draft is due on Monday, February 26. Post the draft in CANVAS.
 

Tuesday, February 20, 2018

English 101 - M/W/F - 9:00-11:40

Welcome to English 101! 

 This is going to be a wonderful semester. I just picked up the course yesterday, so it is not showing on my end in CANVAS yet. So, until that happens, all work will be submitted on paper! Yes, real paper! Once we are up and running in the world of technology on CANVAS, all assignments will be submitted electronically there unless otherwise noted.

 

Let's take a look at the syllabus . . . 

Course Syllabus

ESTRELLA MOUNTAIN COMMUNITY COLLEGE

First – Year Composition – 3 Credit Hours – English 101 - Spring 2018 – 5 Wonderful Weeks
Instructor: Mrs. Patricia Eaton
Contact me:  Canvas communication is the best way contact me. The message works just like e-mail. (This will be set up this week.)



School E-mail: patricia.eaton@estrellamountain.edu
 (Use this for now.)
Blog: 



https://eatonenglish101.blogspot.com/

Note: The blog is your link to what is happening in class and what is due. Links to readings are also posted on the blog. It is your responsibility to check the blog often. The information is also available in the announcement section of CANVAS.

Adjunct Office: 623-935-8139 - Montezuma Hall 119 (You may phone the office and leave a message for me between 8:00 am and 5:00 pm on weekdays.

Required Text: NONE! However, you MUST read the blog and assignment posts. These are the gateway to everything you need to know and do.

Note: This syllabus is subject to change based upon the progress of the class. Weekly updates will be provided on the blog. Use the CANVAS message system to contact me if you do not understand an assignment.   Also, be sure to check the blog for updates and links to required readings.

Office Hours: By appointment – my schedule is flexible. Set up a time to meet with me in the Adjunct office in Montezuma Hall. It is directly across from the Honors office.

Honors Projects- if you are in the Honors program, please check with me for an appropriate assignment for this course. This is a great class for furthering your Honors activities.
Course Description
(Prerequisite: English placement test score of a grade of “C” or better in English 091.)
English 101 focuses on the development of writing skills through a process of thinking, researching, planning, writing, revising, editing, and reviewing expository essays. This course will require students to analyze and respond to text-based writing. Students will be responsible for writing a minimum of six critical essays to develop skills in textual analysis, written expression, and proper documentation. These essays will be word-processed and properly documented. In completing the required essays, students will demonstrate the ability to read difficult material with comprehension; to process information through quotation, summary, and paraphrase; and to integrate the ideas of others into their own sustained written examination of a subject.
Course Competencies
  1. Analyze specific rhetorical contexts, including circumstance, purpose, topic, audience, and writer as well as the writing’s ethical, political, and cultural implications.
  2. Organize writing to support a central idea through unity, coherence, and logical development appropriate to a specific writing context.
  3. Use appropriate conventions in writing, including consistent voice, tone, diction, grammar, and mechanics.
  4. Summarize, paraphrase and quote from sources to maintain academic integrity and to develop and support one’s own ideas.
  5. Use feedback obtained from peer review, instructor comments and/or other resources to revise writing.
  6. Assess one’s own writing strengths and identify strategies for improvement through instructor conference, portfolio review, written evaluation, and/or other methods.
  7. Generate, format, and edit writing using appropriate technologies.
Abilities: Critical thinking and effective communication have been identified as essential to student success and will be integrated into this course. Critical thinking is defined as the ability to identify a problem, develop and implement strategies, evaluate information, reach conclusion, and respond to a problem. Effective communication is defined as the ability to respond to an audience, demonstrate clear sense of purpose, organize information, and deliver information using appropriate language.
Attendance Policy: The discussion board counts as your attendance in this course. Be an active participant! In the event of an emergency, contact me by e-mail: Patricia.Eaton@estrellamountain.edu
 and go to www.eatonenglish101.blogspot.com (Links to an external site.)Links to an external site. for weekly updates for the course.
Tips for success:
  1. Start early. Assignment due dates will be clearly noted on CANVAS and/or the blog.
  2. Keep up. There is NO late work. Once an assignment is closed, you may not post. I do NOT accept assignments via e-mail. All assignments must be posted in the assignment spot on CANVAS unless otherwise noted.
  3. Compose all work in Microsoft Word. Copy/paste into CANVAS. On rare occasions, you may be asked to use PowerPoint or Prezi when completing an assignment.
  4. Ask questions. Post your questions to me in a message in CANVAS. It works like regular e-mail.

Important FYI:
Student Disabilities: If a student has a disability that requires special accommodations, please let me know as soon as possible. “Students with disabilities are encouraged to contact the DRS office at the beginning of the admissions process to discuss accommodation needs and to request an alternate format of printed materials. Some accommodation may require three to four weeks notification. For more information, call 623-935-8935, or contact the EMCC DRS office in Komatke Hall 119, or e-mail: Ramona.shingler@emcmail.maricopa.edu.”
Student Support Services: For writing assistance in the Learning Enhancement Center, students should contact Susan Malmo, Writing Center Coordinator, at 623-935-8419. The Writing Center is located on the first floor of Estrella Hall.
Grading Scale:
  • Four-five documented essays of 3-5 pages will be written exploring various modes of discourse. Each counts as 100 points . I use the EMCC Writing Rubric.
  •  One or two PowerPoint or Prezi formal presentations: 100 points each
  • Various short reading, viewing, writing activities – 15-50 points each.
  • Exam essay - the exam counts as a regular essay. 
  • Weekly discussion board posts - 50 points each week
There are many additional assignments. Each will be explained in detail before it is due. Please keep up. I post the assignments in CANVAS and explain on the BLOG as well.
Late Work: This is an on-line class. I do not accept late work. You must keep up.
  • CANVAS averages all grades. This is the grading scale.
A= 90-100%
B=80-89%
C=70-79%
D=60-69%
F=0-59%
Plagiarism: Plagiarism is the process of borrowing information from other sources or individuals without giving credit. Plagiarism will not be tolerated. Essays will not be accepted unless accompanied by pre-writing exercises, notes, drafts, peer and self-editing marks, etc. This paper trail is proof of a student’s own work. Proof of plagiarism will result in a zero for the assignment.
Misconduct: Students must read the “Code of Student Conduct” in the new Student Handbook for an understanding of what will be expected within the academic setting.
2.3.11 Academic Misconduct
  1. Definitions
    1. Academic Misconduct - includes misconduct associated with the classroom, laboratory or clinical learning process. Examples of academic misconduct include, but are not limited to, cheating, plagiarism, excessive absences, use of abusive or profane language, and disruptive and/or threatening behavior.
    2. Cheating - includes, but is not limited to, (a) use of any unauthorized assistance in taking quizzes, tests, assessment tests or examinations; (b) dependence upon the aid of sources beyond those authorized by the faculty member in writing papers, preparing reports, solving problems, or carrying out other assignments; or (c) the acquisition, without permission, of tests or other academic material belonging to a member of the college faculty or staff.
    3. Plagiarism - includes, but is not limited to, the use of paraphrase or direct quotation of the published or unpublished work of another person without full and clear acknowledgment. It also includes the unacknowledged use of materials prepared by another person or agency engaged in the selling of term papers or other academic materials. Information gathered from the internet and not properly identified is also considered plagiarism.
Final Thoughts: This course is designed to help you become a better writer, researcher, and reader. You will get out of the course what you put into it. You are expected to actively participate in readings, discussions, debates, and reports. Come to class prepared with readings and with required writings and notes. Conduct thorough research. At all times, give credit to the source of information by using proper documentation. Be on time. Be positive. Ask questions. Contribute your thoughts. Be tolerant of others and of ideas that differ from your own.

Writing Rubric: SAAC-October 21st-draft.doc
Academic Support
We care about your success! In addition to meeting with your instructor, EMCC students may use the FREE Academic Success Center/Tutoring services located in Estrella Hall South, first floor, to reinforce and supplement classroom instruction. Free of charge on-campus and online tutoring services are available for most courses offered at EMCC. http://www.estrellamountain.edu/students/tutoring (Links to an external site.)Links to an external site.
How to get the most from your tutoring sessions:
  • The sooner and the more often you come to tutoring, the better.
  • Come prepared. Bring your class notes, textbook, and assignment instructions to your tutoring sessions. Look over the readings, try problems, and/or attempt an essay rough draft.  If you can, bring a list of specific questions to tutoring.
Additional resources that may be beneficial to your success in this class are:

If you are called into court, experience a medical emergency, or experience a change in military assignments, let me know so that we can work out a way for you to successfully complete the course. 
Again, all work must be posted in the assignment spaces on CANVAS unless otherwise noted.  Do not send e-mail attachments. Do not post assignments in CANVAS messages or in e-mail attachments. 

Now that you have seen the syllabus, complete the following:
Assignment #1: (20 possible points.)

  •  Read and respond to the syllabus. It is posted here.
  • Write three sentences that note items of interest.
  • Write up to three questions or concerns you might have regarding this course.
  • Write three sentences explaining what you think you will or will not like about a college composition course. 
Use the note card provided for your responses. Be sure you name is on the top. You have 10 minutes. 



Class Work

1. Getting to know you activity . . .Listen for the instructions!
2. In-class writing "All About YOU!" (Quick Write) Here are the instructions...
A.  Getting to know you activity - you need the camera; the one on our phone will do.

A. Look around the campus. You have 10 minutes to walk around and think. Take a picture of an object or space that is representative of you as a writer. For example,  perhaps you get frustrated when writing. A cactus just might represent that aspect of your writing! Maybe you often experience writer's block. A picture of a gate or door might be just what you need to explain the feeling. When you return to class, you will be completing the following:
B.Write a well developed paragraph or two that explains why you are like the photo. What characteristics do you share with the item in the photo? What does it say about you as a writer? You have 5 minutes to discuss at your table.
You have 12 minutes to compose.
You have 12 minutes peer edit. Pass your essay to the person on your right.
     Read your partner's draft. ASK QUESTIONS. Give praise. Offer suggestions.

C. Homework: Revise your essay. (E-mail your draft to you if you do not have a jump-drive with you. That way you won't have to retype the entire document.

The final copy is due at the beginning of class on Friday. It must be typed and attached to the draft. (50 points)

Class Work:  Body Art discussion.
  • What is body art? 
  • What constitutes body art? 
  • Why do people make changes to their physical appearance? 
  •  To what extent is body art helpful or useful?
  • To what extent is body art harmful?
  • How does our current society view body art? 
  •  
Complete the following for homework: 

Homework - Readings - Complete the tasks on paper. Be sure your name appears at the top. It is due at the beginning of class on Friday.

Readings – 50 Points – 25 for answering the first five questions. 25 for composing the brief letter.
“Under My Skin” by Jon Bowen
Questions:
1.       This article begins and ends with a brief personal narrative. What do these personal experiences add to the essay? (Answer in complete sentences.)

2.       Locate and list three examples of the use of humor in this essay. You might find humor in a name, action, or language use.  In your opinion did the use of humor add to or detract from the effectiveness of the essay. Explain.

3.       Look back at the author’s use of direct quotations to create conversation. Explain the punctuation and paragraphing. Explain the “rules” for punctuating dialogue based on your observation.
“On Teenagers and Tattoos”
 by Andres Martin
Questions:

1.       What is Martin’s thesis? In other words, what point is he trying to make? Did that point surprise you? Explain.

2.       Martin originally wrote this article for the Journal of Child and Adolescent Psychiatry. What is his message to his fellow physicians? What other audiences might benefit from reading this article? Explain.

3.       Compose a brief letter to a person who is trying to decide if he or she should or should not get a tattoo or piercing. Use lines from reading to support or to advise against the pending decision. Please include your personal reasons as well when writing to advise another. Limit your letter to one page.)