Tuesday, March 29, 2016

March 29, 2016 - Tuesday

Class Work

1. Make your "Rock" comparison/contrast paper visible.
2. Find a partner.
3. Share your essays - 4 minutes each.
4. Discuss:
  • Organizational pattern
  • Personal opinions about the "best and worst" rock
  • Transitions
  • Introductions
  • Conclusions
5. Effective use of transitions: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/transitions.htm
Look at:
An Analysis of Coherence - http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/taste/taste2.htm

  • Four groups - look at your section of the essay. Determine how the author uses transitions and other writing techniques to "glue" the essay together.
6. Another look at transitions: http://www.smart-words.org/linking-words/transition-words.html Pay attention to the information at the bottom of the page that explains WHERE to use them in writing.

7. Select a topic!  At your table, generate a list of possible topics. (2 minutes!)
8. Look  at two additional examples - handouts -
"The Virtues of Growing Older"
"American Space and Chinese Place"

9. Homework:


Thursday, March 24, 2016

March 24, 2016 - Thursday

Class Work
Comparison/contrast essay:

Homework:

Write a brief comparison/contrast paper about your two rocks. Use ONE of the two possible ways to organize your paper. (Point by Point or Topic by Topic)  Make it clear which rock you like the best by your word choices and by your phrases. Be sure to introduce both rocks before jumping into the comparison. In addition, add a few concluding lines.

Reminder: The final draft of your persuasive technology essay is due Tuesday!

Tuesday, March 22, 2016

March 22, 2014 - Tuesday

Class Work

1.  Peer Editing- two others will read your essay. ach will complete a peer editing sheet:
  • You need to make your draft visible on your computer screen or have a paper copy at your desk.
  • Sign your name in the "author" spot on the red and on the white peer editing sheets.
  • Trade places! Your are now editor. Sign in on one of the two sheets.
  • You have 15 minutes to read the essay and complete the peer editing sheet.
  • After 15 minutes, you will trade places again. Move to a table far from your home space!
  • Sign, read, and respond for 15 minutes.
  • Return to your desk. Join in the class discussion.
Learn to write conclusions:

Homework: Revise your draft. Post the FINAL draft by Thursday, March 24, 2016.

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Thursday, March 10, 2016

March 10, 2016- Thursday

Class Work & Homework
1. Get ready to write the body of the essay. Here are some tips!
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/argument.htm
Look at "Cry Wolf," the sample essay at the link. We will work on this in class . Find the claim, reasons, and evidence/proof. Use the paper chart to write your notes. We will begin in class. Finish reading the example and filling in the chart for homework.  Due: Tuesday, March 22, 2016
2. Using your notes as a guide, begin with your introduction and write the body of your essay. Refer back to the Technology: Friend or Foe? assignment sheet. The draft is due on Tuesday, March 22.

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Tuesday, March 8, 2016

March 8, 2016 - Tuesday

Class Work

(What did you think about the conclusion of "The Veldt?" How real is too real?)

1. Print a paper copy of the introduction to your "Technology: Friend or Foe" essay and join the circle. If you have the copy on your personal laptop, you may bring it to  the circle instead of a paper copy.
  • This is a readers' circle. When it is your turn, read your introduction to the class.
  • As a listener in the circle, you need to determine the strategy or strategies used in the introduction.
  • You also need to share if you would or would not want to read the rest of the essay and explain why or why not. Provide specifics reasons and give suggestions. What made you want to read on? Or, what would the writer need to do to interest you?
2. Get ready to write the body of the essay. Here are some tips!
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/argument.htm

3. Develop your essay with claims, reasons, and evidence. (Refer to the chart on the board and refer to the chart.


 

Claim: (Claim that your chosen technology is a friend or a foe of modern society.)

 
 
 

Why? (This is the question readers will ask. You, the author will answer.)
Because:
Provide at least three reasons.
Reason:
 
 
 
Reason:
Reason:

Facts and Proof!
(Prove that your reasons are valid.   Find experts to support your point of view and cite your sources.)

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 4. Look at "Cry Wolf," the sample essay at the link. We will work on this in class on Thursday. Find the claim, reasons, and evidence/proof. Use the paper chart to write your notes. We will begin in class. Finish reading the example and filling in the chart for homework.  Due: Tuesday, March 15, 2016
5. Continue with your research and fill in your own claim/reasons/evidence chart. Post your chart in CANVAS. Due: Thursday, March 10, 2016.

Thursday, March 3, 2016

March 3, 2016 - Thursday

Class Work

1. Write your name and your topic on a post-it and post in the pro or con section of the board.
2. Meet in assigned like-groups to discuss what evidence you found to support your point of view. Share sources.
3. Meet with the opposition to explain your point of view. LISTEN to each other then respond.

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4. Learn how to write effective introductions.
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/intros.htm
http://www.butte.edu/departments/cas/tipsheets/style_purpose_strategy/intro_conclusions.html
http://writingcenter.unc.edu/handouts/introductions/

Visual examples:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Rl3O6DMsJgI

Homework:
Select a strategy for writing your introduction and write! Post the introduction in CANVAS. This does not mean that you can't change the introduction once you have finished.

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Let's begin "The Veldt" by Ray Bradbury. How real is too real in video games?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=erkL_IqlupE

Homework:
Finish "The Veldt". Write a one-page response to the following:

Video games are/are not dangerous. Pick a side. Support your thoughts with evidence from the video and from life experiences.




Tuesday, March 1, 2016

March 1, 1016 - Tuesday

Class Work
The Art Gallery is open!
1. Open your slide show on your computer.
2. Half of the room will present while the other half watches, listens, and takes notes. We will switch off speaking/listening parts several times while the gallery is open.
3. When you are speaking, you should be addressing:
Looking at Art
· What is the title of the work? How does the title help you to understand the message? What is the message?
· How does this work relate to your topic? Discuss.
· What is the most obvious image in the work. To where is your eye drawn?
· Look at the colors. Are they symbolic? Would the message be different if the colors were different? Explain.
· Study the shading and shadowing. How do these elements impact the overall message?
· How do the lines and angles impact your eye as you study the work?
· Who is the artist? When was the work created? Is the artist's message about a specific event in history? What was going on in the world when the work was created? Is the art universal - speaks to people of all times and in all places, or is it limited to the audience for whom it was created.
· How does the work relate to us in 21st century America?
4. While you are listening, you need to take notes. (Sheet provided.)
5. Submit your notes at the conclusion of the activity.
 
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Preview of coming attractions!
Technology – Friend or Foe?
For this essay, you are writing to convince the opposition. Consider the dangers and advantages of technology. For this essay, you must pick a side. Think of this essay as a debate on paper. You must know what the opposition thinks, but you do not support that point of view.
I.                    Introduction –
a.       Identify the specific technology you will be discussing – cell phone, computer, automobile, dishwasher, microwave, GPS, video games, etc.
b.      Capture the attention of the audience in the normal way with startling statistics, an interesting anecdote, a quotation from an expert, lines from a song or poem, a thought provoking question, etc. In short, make sure that what you say makes the reader want to know more.
c.       In addition, state your thesis – make your point of view clear! (Some of you may be taking a creative approach. See me if this is the case.)
II.                  The body of the paper will do several things –
a.       Convince the reader that they either need or do not need the technology.
b.      Provide a brief history of the specific technology you plan to discuss. What was life like before its invention? When was it invented? How has it evolved? What is its story?
c.       Provide clear evidence to support your point of view. You must have proof from at least four of the following:
                                                               i.      At least three experts/sources. You may use the articles studied in class and articles that specifically relate to your chosen technology.
                                                             ii.      A current news source such as a newspaper or magazine article or news cast.
                                                            iii.      An interview with at least one user.
                                                           iv.      A personal anecdote.
                                                             v.      Lines from literature – poem, short story, or novel. “There Will Come Soft Rains”  and “The Veldt” were studied in class. You may use other SciFi literature.
                                                           vi.      A work of art
                                                          vii.      Strong statistics from an expert source.
The body of the paper will be several paragraphs in length.
III.                Conclusion –
Wrap it up for the readers. Leave them with a call to action to either give up or get the gadget you are supporting. Be sure they know why they need or do not need one. Consider:
a.       Convenience
b.      Cost
c.       Safety
d.      Environmental impact
e.      Impact on society
f.        Ethical concerns
 
Homework
By Thursday, you need to determine your topic and decide if you are for or against the use of the gizmo or gadget.
You also need to locate at least 3 articles related to your topic. Feel free to use the information available in our own EMCC library either on-line or in person. http://www.estrellamountain.edu/library Other Internet or paper sources are also acceptable.
Create an annotated bibliography of your sources. Remember, EasyBib is your friend! Of course, other citation helps are also "friendly." (MLA Style)
Here are some tips:
Examples: