Thursday, April 18, 2013

Thursday, April 18, 2013

Class Work

1. We will finish the presentations. By the way, they have been excellent!
2. I need you to do two things in MyCompLab - just send me a "hello" in two posts...
A. PowerPoint Presentation
B. Notes
Without this, I cannot post your grades!

Thanks.

3. Let's have a little fun...Game time!

Homework
4. Reminder ....bring a paper copy of your Environmental Issues essay on Tuesday. You can post it in MyCompLab if you wish. 


Thursday, April 11, 2013

Thursday, April 11, 2013

Class Work

Work in progress:
1. Your critique of An Inconvenient Truth is due in hard copy today. You may e-mail it to me by midnight if you are not quite finished.
2. You should be continuing the research for the problem/solution essay...here are some tips.

Create a box outline -
A. Identify the problem. Prove it exists. Consider charts, graphs, and hard numbers.
B. Identify the causes. Be specific.
C. Identify the effects.
D. Share solutions - this is a call to action. People are interested in the popular question, "What's in it for me?" Tell them! Make sure the readers know why your solution is the best possible solution.
E. Create a Works Cited project in EasyBib to keep track of your sources. You must have at least 5 sources for this project. Consider interviews, polls (informal), visuals, charts, graphs, articles from experts, news stories, TV documentaries, etc. EasyBib has 59 possibilities! Review the list if you are having trouble coming up with information.

The draft is due Thursday - April 18. Bring a paper copy to class or be ready to access it electronically.

3. You should be working on your PowerPoint presentation. Here are some guidelines for organization:

Your slides should include the following:
Slide #1: Title and Your Name
Slide #2: Identify the problem - make your claim
Slides 3, 4, 5: Explain the causes of the problem. This answers "because" and possibly gives evidence.
Slides 6, 7, 8: Explain the effects of the problem - This is more evidence.
Slides 9, 10, 11: Call to action - give the viewers concrete examples of what can be done and explain what difference their actions will make. (This section contains another claim, more reasons, and more evidence.
Slide 12: Works Cited page - This should look just like the Works Cited page in an essay.

Remember that an effective PowerPoint presentation should follow these guidelines.
Layout
· Photographs, graphic design, and clipart are useful and enhance the presentation
· Title, author, and course identification are on the first slide
· Works Cited page is the last frame and is in MLA format
Fonts
· Font size is at least 16
· Footless Font is used
· Color is of a deep enough contrast to be easily read
· Font colors are limited to three or four throughout the presentation
Text
· Bulleted points are limited to no more than six per slide
· Six or fewer words per bullet are used
· Headlines are effective
· Spelling is correct
· Punctuation is correct
· End punctuation or no end punctuation is consistent when using bullets
· Upper and lower case is used correctly
· Animation is limited and necessary
· Sound is limited and effective
Content
· A work of art is included
· Point/thesis is clear
· Supporting elements are evident
· Introduction captures the attention of the audience
· Conclusion contains a strong message
· Clear steps for a “call to action” are obvious

Watch, laugh, and learn...
Tips for effective presentations...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ENOvAGQ5UlU

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=whTwjG4ZIJg

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ORxFwBR4smE Short how not to do a PowerPoint

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wXILI9Q1jIw Two minute how not to give a speech - find the errors

Sign up for your presentation slot.
1. We begin on Tuesday.
2. You must have your presentation on a jump-drive. E-mailed projects take too long to find. Be ready.
3. Your presentation should be no longer than 5 minutes and no shorter than 2 1/2 minutes.
4. If you are absent when it is your turn to present, you may be docked 10 points from the final presentation grade unless you contacted me in advance and made other arrangements.

Thursday, April 4, 2013

Thursday, April 4, 2013

Class Work

1. Finish viewing An Inconvenient Truth. Go over the questions in class.  Answer the questions and post the answers in MyCompLab.

2. Create a Plus/Minus chart to "review" the documentary. What was good? What should have been done differently?

3. Study the guidelines for writing reviews on pp. 273-282 in Write Now. Pay attention to the key terms defined on p. 274. These will serve to structure your review of An Inconvenient Truth.

Also see http://suite101.com/article/how-to-write-reviews-a50890 for writing tips.

In addition, consider the tips found at http://homeworktips.about.com/od/EssaysTypes/a/How-To-Write-A-Film-Review.htm

4. The draft of your review is due on Tuesday. Bring a paper copy or electronic copy to class. The draft will not be posted in MyCompLab.

5. Do you have a topic to research? If not, now is a great time to find a cause! Continue your research. On Tuesday, be ready to share your topic and a brief summary of your research to date. Remember, in the final paper, you will need to prove a problem exists, give the history and causes of the problem, note the effects, and end with a call to action.

Want to know more about Global Warming? Go to www.ClimateCrisis.net
This site goes along with the documentary and is recommented for you to be part of the solution.

Tuesday, April 2, 2013

Tuesday, April 2, 2013

Class Work


Nature: What is Mother Nature Telling Us?

With a partner, walk around the campus for 10 minutes and take 10 pictures that create a message.

Description of the picture – what did you see?
Message- what is it saying?
 
 
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An Inconvenient Truth – Questions

 

After viewing the documentary, answer the following questions.
1.   Why does the film open and close with serene images of nature: lush green leaves and a gently flowing river on a sunny day, followed by Al Gore’s voice-over about this peaceful place? What is the impact on the viewer?
2.       In this film, Gore narrates a moment in 1989 when his six-year-old son dropped his father’s hand, ran into the street, and was severely injured. How does this personal story relate to Gore’s mission?

3.     Much of the film consists of scientific facts and charts. Think back and answer the following:

  • Why do we have global warming?
  • What is the relationship between carbon dioxide and temperature?
  • How does global warming contribute to an increase in the number and severity of storms, hurricanes, tornadoes, and typhoons?
  • How can global warming cause both violent precipitation as well as droughts
4.  Explain the significance of each of these references from the film:

The findings of core drills

The thawing of the permafrost, the splitting of the Ward Hunt ice shelf, and the disappearance of the Larson ice shelf

The Arctic ice cap disappearing

The image of a canary in a coal mine

The image of the frog in the cooking pot

5.       Cite three ecological consequences of global warming in the animal and plant communities.

6.       Gore used quotations from several memorable people.  Explain how they apply to the topic of global warming.

Mark Twain: “What gets us into trouble is not what we don’t know; it’s what we know that just ain’t so.”

Upton Sinclair: “It is difficult to get a man to understand something when his salary depends upon his not understanding it.” Consider citing specific ways that this statement is illustrated throughout this film.
Stephen Pacala and Robert Socolow in Science magazine: “Humanity already possesses the fundamental scientific, technical, and industrial know-how to solve the carbon and climate problems.”

7.  Explain the significance of the film’s title An Inconvenient Truth.

Homework:
Continue your research on the topic of your choice.

 



 

Wednesday, March 27, 2013

Thursday, March 28, 2013

Class Work
1. What topics are you exploring? Remember, this will end up being a cause/effect paper with suggested solutions. You will need to define the problem. In other words, prove that a problem exists. You will also provide a bit of history of the problem. This will include the causes. Because the problem exists, there are effects. You will be sharing those. Finally, you will encourage the reading audience to be part of the solution. You will need to provide suggestions for action that can be done by the average American.

2. Let 's look at a couple of problem/solution essays.
Do you fish? Have you ever gone fishing? To you eat what you catch, or do you catch and release?
Read  "Evening the Odds" to consider the possibilities.

3. Take a look at the picture on your table. How could these cute animals possibly be pests?
Discuss, then read "Practical Wildlife Management." (handout only)
A. What is the problem?
B. What is the history of the problem?
C. What solutions are offered?
D. Are all possible solutions likely to be successful?
E. Were you convinced that the best solution was offered?

4. Just for fun, read, "So Mother Earth Had This Boyfriend." This clearly shows that humor can be used to persuade and possibly move one to action! (Handout and http://www.enotes.com/how-write-problem-solution-essay-how-to/how-write-problem-solution-essay) This originally appeared in Delta Sky Magazine.

5. Something to think about...more nature stuff.

"Forgive My Guilt"
by Robert P. Tristram Coffin
 
Not always sure what things called sins may be,
I am sure of one sin I have done,
It was years ago, and I was a boy,
I lay in the frostflowers with a gun,
The air ran blue as the flowers, I held my breath,
Two birds on golden legs slim as dream things
Ran like quicksilver on the golden sand,
My gun went off, they ran with broken wings
Into the sea, I ran to fetch them in,
But they swam with their heads high out to sea,
They cried like two sorrowful high flutes,
With jagged ivory bones where wings should be.
 
For days I heard them when I walked that headland
Crying out to their kind in the blue,
The other plovers were going over south
On silver wings leaving these broken two.
The cries went out one day; but I still hear them
Over all the sounds of sorrow in war or peace
I ever heard, time cannot drown them,
Those slender flutes of sorrow never cease.
Two airy things forever denied the air!
I never knew how their lives at last were spilt,
But I have hoped for years all that is wild,
Airy, and beautiful will forgive my guilt.

  • Work with a group at your table.
  • Decide on the five most important words in the selection.
  • Select three words that are new to you. Create your own meaning for these words. Do NOT use a dictionary.
  •  Now, write a short statement explaining what is going on in the poem.
  • Share with the class.


6. In just 16 simple steps, you can plan and write a problem/solution essay.
http://www.enotes.com/how-write-problem-solution-essay-how-to/how-write-problem-solution-essay

7. Let's brainstorm possible topics.

Homework:  Continue to explore topics related to nature. Now is the time to select a problem that needs to be solved. L:ook for the history of the problem. Write a paragraph or two explaining the history. Include the source(s). (20 points)

Monday, March 25, 2013

Tuesday, March 26, 2013

Class Work

It's time for a laugh! Our wonderful English language is ever changing and ever colorful!
http://news.yahoo.com/10-old-fashioned-swears-spice-cussin-070500556.html

1. Peer Review of the C/C essay.

Please edit/revise your essay as needed. Post the final copy in MyCompLab. It is due Thursday.
(100 pts.)

2. Causes and effect. Consider the following "what if" situation...
A. A person is late to work. (That is the event.)
What were the causes?
What are or might be the effects?

B. The power went out.
What might be the causes?
What effects might result?

3. Look at the following site:
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/cause_effect.htm

Homework: Read "Cold Comfort" and click on the magnifying glasses for additional writing tips.
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/cause/cause_frames.htm

4. More sample essays
5. Now that we know there is a problem. We know the causes. We know the effects. What can be done? Is there a solution?
http://glenniacampbell.typepad.com/silenti/2010/05/saving-the-oceans-with-jeanmichel-cousteau.html

6. Begin to think about possible topics. The topic must relate to nature or planet Earth in some way. What problems exist? What is worth investigating?

Explore two possibilities. Do a 10 minute Internet search of each topic. Which do you like best? Which seems to lead to the best information. Your assignment as a writer will be to convince the readers that a problem exists. You must provide causes, effects, and solutions. Bring your notes to class on Thursday.

Wednesday, March 20, 2013

Thursday

Class Work
1. Share your comparison/contrast chart at your table.
Questions?
Concerns?
2. Let's talk transitions...
http://www.studygs.net/wrtstr6.htm

Here's a game!
http://www.studygs.net/trans/wrtstr6a.htm

Here is a nice, tidy list!
http://www.smart-words.org/transition-words.html

And, a terrific chart!
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/transitions.htm

Without the careful use of transitions, a comparison/contrast essay ends up sounding like a long list. You want your writing to be conversational.

3. Let's put some of the transitions into action! Try the following practice.
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/quizzes/combining_quiz1.htm

4. What about voice? Does your paper lack personality? If so, consider this.
http://www.write101.com/lethamfind.htm

Let's practice a bit.
Exercise:  Go outside. Find something unfamiliar, something growing, something tossed away, something strange or wonderful! Bring it back to class. If it is not something you can carry, take a picture. Bring that.

Now, describe the object in such a way that the reader can tell that you love it!

Next, write a new description of the same object, only this time show that you hate the object!

Finally, write one more description of the same object and have a so-what attitude.

Post all three descriptions in MyCompLab.

5. How will you introduce your subjects?  How will you conclude?

6. Consider adding:
  • Research: This might include statistics and numbers. For example, if you are comparing two vacation options, share the cost of each! Money talks.
  • A famous quotation (Expert)
  • A quotation from a classmate or friend (Ordinary person)
  • Personal stories
7. Make it interesting.

Homework: Write the draft. Post it in MyCompLab by Tuesday, March 26th. Also, bring a paper copy to class to use for a peer editing activity. If you prefer, you may use an electronic copy. Just be sure you can access it.