Wednesday, September 5, 2012

Thursday, September 6, 2011

Class Work

1. Back to love and the perfect mate across time. . . Words from 1895 - the perfect man and the perfect woman. My how times have changed!
2. What two items are you comparing and contrasting? Thanks for posting, but please share with the class.
3. Transitions . . . use often in the comparison/contrast essay. Otherwise, your paper will read like a list. It needs to be conversational.
http://www.studygs.net/wrtstr6.htm
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/transitions.htm
also see Write Now pp. 423-424
4. Writing introductions...make yours great!
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/intros.htm
http://homeworktips.about.com/od/paperassignments/a/introsentence.htm
http://grammar.about.com/od/il/g/Introductory-Paragraph.htm
5. The ever "popular" thesis statement . . . how to write one...remember, a thesis statement answers the question, "What's your point?" The rest of the paper proves that point.
http://www.indiana.edu/~wts/pamphlets/thesis_statement.shtml
See Write Now, pp. 412-417 for additional information.
6. Writing conclusions. . . make the readers remember!
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/conclude.html
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/endings.htm
7. There are even more ways to avoid run-on sentences. Meet the Snobs! (Conjunctive adverbs)
http://www.engl.niu.edu/wac/conjadv.html They really like their jewels! (; and ,)
FANBOY review . . .

Homework
1c. View "Narrowing a Thesis,"  video 48 in MyCompLab/Write Now. After viewing the video, explain, in your own words, how to write a thesis statement. Then, write the thesis statement for your comparison/contrast essay. Post both in My Comp Lab.
2c. Write the draft of your comparison/contrast essay.
Concentrate on the following:
  1. the introduction
  2. the thesis
  3. the organization (Use one either point by point or item by item to organize.)
  4. the conclusion
  5. transitions
  6. elaboration . . . this is not a list!
Bring either a paper copy or electronic version to class on Tuesday. Also post your draft in MyCompLab.
3c. Think about what research is needed to strengthen your essay. Locate at least one article for each item you are comparing and contrasting. Write a brief summary of each article. Post both in MyCompLab. Include the URL and the Works Cited information.

Monday, September 3, 2012

September 4, 2012

Class Announcement: Due to a family emergency, I had to fly to Virginia last Thursday. I was unable to grade last Thursday's work. I will be catching up this week. I do apologize and will happily accept your late work!

Class Work

How did the essay writing go? Questions? How was the formatting? Did you run into problems with the documentation?

1. Review of two ways to organize comparison/contrast essays. (Two Shoes)
2. Practice: With a partner, select two web sites to compare and contrast.
  • You might consider two soda companies, two shoe companies, two car companies, two cookie companies, etc.
  • Look at both sites.
  • Decide what three points you will compare and contrast. Will it be visual presentation? Perhaps you will compare information available. You might consider ease of use. There are other options, but this should get you started.
  • Decide how you want to present the information. Will it be point by point or topic by topic?
  • Present your findings to the class. Convince us that one site is clearly superior to the other.
3. Sample essays and additional information:
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/comparison.htm
"Shopping in America"
"American Space, Chinese Place"

4. Let's discuss dating customs then and now. . .

5.  There are even more ways to avoid run-on sentences. Meet the Snobs! (Conjunctive adverbs)
http://www.engl.niu.edu/wac/conjadv.html  They really like their jewels! (; and ,)
FANBOY review . . .

Homework
Activity 1B. Decide what two items/actions/ activities/places, etc. you will compare and contrast. Do your research. Read about them. Go there. Participate in the activities. Research what others have to say. What do experts report? Collect information.

Create an outline of your findings. Use one of the formats discussed in class: point-by-point or item-by-item. Post your outline in My Comp Lab. It is due Thursday.

2B. Read "Virtual Love" by Meghan Daum (Handout - it is not available on-line.)
Answer questions 2, 3, 6, 7, and 8. Post your answers in MyCompLab. You do not have to type the questions, but you do need to write complete sentences.

3B. Locate one article about on-line dating. Read it. Write a one or two paragraph summary of the article. Also, write an additional paragraph, explain if you agree or disagree with the information presented in the article. Post your paragraphs in MyCompLab.

Wednesday, August 29, 2012

August 30 - Thursday

Class Work

1. How is the work going? Questions? Concerns?
2. Peer Editing Activity and Introduction to the Writing Rubric. (handout - the document is also available on BlackBoard.)
3. Learn to use EasyBib for your Works Cited page. You must register at the site, but it is FREE! Just remember who you are and the e-mail you used. The site will keep your sources safe! It will create perfectly formatted MLA Works Cited pages. What could be better?
www.easybib.com
4. Learn to give credit to your sources within the text.
  • Sample essay: www.dianahacker.com/pdfs/hacker-Daly-MLA.pdf  
  • Write Now: pp.  394-399
  • Write Now: pp. 384-385
  • Write Now: pp. 377-379
  • Pay special attention to Write Now: p. 381 - Strategies for summarizing, paraphrasing, and using quotations (Also pp. 375-376)
  • View video 45 in the Write Now media resources Summarizing and Paraphrasing
5. Avoid run-on sentences, comma splices, and fragments.
6. You should now be ready to write your final draft of the Body Art essay.
  • Take a stand.
  • Begin with an amazing introduction.
  • End with a memorable conclusion
  • Present a clear point of view.
  • Support with at least three in-text citations.
  • Include your personal experience story, or at least part of it.
  • Include the Works Cited page
  • Use MLA formatting.
  • Submit in MCL - Activity #11


Homework
Activity #8 - Post your answer in MCL. This will be due next Tuesday....This is a leftover assignment from Tuesday.Using EasyBib or other citation machine, create a Works Cited page for your Body Art paper. Include the three articles you located for homework over the weekend. Also include an interview with one of the others in class. You may include additional sources if you have them.
www.easybib.com

The document you post in MCL will be a Word document. Formatting counts. If you follow all the steps in EasyBib, the Word documents will be created for you.

 (#10 was part of Tuesday's homework.)

Activity #11 Post in MCL.
write your final draft of the Body Art essay.
  • Take a stand.
  • Begin with an amazing introduction.
  • End with a memorable conclusion.
  • Present a clear point of view.
  • Support with at least three in-text citations.
  • Include your personal experience story, or at least part of it.
  • Include the Works Cited page
  • Use MLA formatting.
  • Submit in MCL - Activity #11
Activity #12 - Post in MCL
Learn to write comparison/contrast essays by reading Chapter 23 in Write Now. Then, complete exercise #2 on p. 459. Instead of highlighting instances where you found comparison and contrast strategies, list them in the space in MCL. Following your list, include the two to three sentence assessment as described in the assignment.

Monday, August 27, 2012

Tuesday, August 28

Class Work

1. Learn to add dialogue to your personal body art experience by studying three personal example essays:

2. Practice writing dialogue by inventing a character and having a conversation with another at your table. This will be a "silent" conversation as all dialogue must be in writing. (typed or hand written - your choice) You must also include description so that the readers/listeners will know where you are and why you are having the discussion. You also need to include a brief description of your respective characters in the narrative.

vate.org/pdf/ideas/creating_characters.pdf (Yahoo Search: Creating Characters by Pat Seward - a pdf file should appear.)

3. Identify audience - who needs to know your opinion about body art?

4. Identify audience by looking at advertising. (Magazine activity - work with a partner.)
5. Persuasive techniques used in advertising:

See: http://www.foothilltech.org/rgeib/english/media_literacy/advertising_techniques.htm

Look for these examples in the ads you located. What techniques were used to persuade you to part with your money?

These are basically the same techniques that can be used in persuasive writing. Sometimes they go by other names, but the intent is the same - to convince the reader. (We will go into more detail in a later unit.)
6. Learn to format papers. See:
  • Check to be sure you followed MLA formatting
  • www.dianahacker.com/pdfs/hacker-Daly-MLA.pdf
  • Also see pp. 393-399 in Write Now.
  • 7. Give credit to your sources. Learn to use EasyBib.
    www.easybib.com
    8. Write the draft of your Body Art essay. The introduction is important. You will be answering the question, "What's your point?" Some folks call this the thesis. What are you trying to prove? In the essay, you need to make your point. Do this by supporting your excellent opinions with documented facts from your sources. (We will go over in-text citations on Thursday. Note where the information came from for now.) You also need to weave your personal body art experience into the paper. You might just have some, but not all of it. Or, you might include the entire story.

    The conclusion is also important. End it with power! Do not change your mind in the middle of the essay.

    Bring a paper copy to class for a peer editing activity on Thursday. (You may print in the room if printing is a problem.)

    Homework

    Activity #7 - Post your answers in MCL.
    Write a brief description of the audience for your Body Art essay. (One or two paragraphs will be fine.)
    Who are they? What is the age? Profession? Background? Does religion come into play? Social standing? Income? Education? These are some items to consider when identifying an audience and when writing to persuade that audience.

    Activity #8 - Post your answer in MCL.   This will be due next Tuesday....
    Using EasyBib or other citation machine, create a Works Cited page for your Body Art paper. Include the three articles you located for homework over the weekend. Also include an interview with one of the others in class. You may include additional sources if you have them.

    The document you post in MCL will be a Word document. Formatting counts. If you follow all the steps in EasyBib, the Word documents will be created for you.

    Activity #9 - Post your answer in MCL.
    Read pp. 424-426. Also see: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/intros.htm and http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/endings.htm In your own words explain what makes an excellent introduction and powerful conclusion. How can you add "energy" to both?
    (Two paragraphs required.)

    Activity #10 - Post your answer in MCL
    See #8 under Class Work. Write the draft and post. Also, print a paper copy to bring to class for a peer editing activity on Thursday.

    Thursday, August 23, 2012

    Body Art Research and Writing

    Class Work
    1. How did you do with the Overview module? Questions? I will grade this on Monday. How was the work load with this?
    2. Rock Activity: Go outside and find a rock. Bring it back to class. This is now your rock for the remainder of the morning. You will be getting to know your rock and using your powers of descriptive writing to help you describe your rock in such a way that anybody in the room can identify it.
    • Listen to the questions and respond in writing.
    • Once finished with the questions, turn your answers into  smooth flowing paragraphs.
    • Place your rock on the "rock" table.
    • Swap paragraphs - locate the rock described.
    3. Body Art...Who has body art? What is body art? What are the results? When is body art used? When did body art start? (What is the history of body art?  Where can one get body art? Why do people use body art? How is body art obtained? How do people respond to body art? (Discussion)

    4. Discuss a personal body art experience  (Think/pair/share)
    5. Learn to write about a personal experience by studying three examples:
    6. Read either the "History of Body Piercings" or the "History of Tattoos".  (Paper copies in class.)
    With the others at your table, discuss the who, what, when where, why, and how of the body art.
    To what extent is comtemporary body art the same? How does it differ from ancient body art?
    Create one report sheet to submit. (Who, What, When, Where, Why, How + a "same"/"different" chart) Be sure all names are on the paper

    7. Overview of the homework. You must have access to MyCompLab.



    Homework: MCL is short for MyCompLab.
    Activity #1 (Post your answers in MCL)
    Read: http://www.professorshouse.com/Family/Teens/Articles/Teenagers-and-Tattoos/
    Make a bulleted list of important or interesting information from the article. Do you agree or disagree with the messages in this article? Explain.

    What do you think? Was this information useful? Do you think teens or others would agree? Write a two - three paragraph response and post it in MyCompLab in the appropriate space.

    Activity #2 (Post your answers in MCL)

    Read "Under My Skin" by Jon Bowen
    http://www.salon.com/1999/06/23/tattoo/

    Answer the following questions for "Under My Skin."
    1. How do the anecdotes about himself and his tattoo artist ("Flash Gordon") enrich this essay?

    2. Bowen deliberately shifts from first person "I" to second person "you" as he describes the process of getting a tattoo and reconsidering the tattoo. Find three examples of the second person perspective as you evaluate this strategy.

    3. Find three examples of Bowen's use of humor, catchy phrases or lively tone to keep this informative essay from becoming tedious or predictable.

    4. The author uses allusions that may be familiar to many readers. Do you know the origin of "Flash Gordon", "tabula rasa" or "to undo or not to undo - that's the question?" How do references to familiar characters or phrases help or hinder an essay?

    5. Evaluate Bowen's inclusion of direct quotations from tattoo technicians and medical specialists to describe the reasons for removal, the degree of pain, and the results. How does Bowen keep this research from making his essay too technical or inaccessible for the readers?

    New thoughts . . .Why are tattoos, piercings, and unique hair designs so prevalent today? What has caused these forms of body art to enter mainstream American culture?

    Activity #3 (Post your answers in MCL)

    After reading "On Teenagers and Tattoos" by Andres Martin, answer questions 1-6 under Thinking About the Text. (Paper Handout from class)
    Be sure that you number your answers and write complete sentences.

    Activity #4 (Post your answers in MCL)

    Read the information at http://www.enotes.com/topics/how-write-summary
    This will explain how to write a summary.

    1. Locate three additional articles related to the topic of Body Art.
    2.Write and post a 50 word summary of each article.
    3.In addition, include a brief personal reaction to the article. Was it useful? Was there new information? Do you agree with the author?
    4. Include source information for each article.


    Activity # 5 (Post your writing in MCL)

    We have all had a personal experience with body art. Keep in mind that body art may be a simple as a new hair cut or selecting a special type of clothing for an event. Think back to your past. In writing, create that special moment when you had a personal experience with body art. Describe in detail. Description is the key.

    Also, include dialogue when writing your personal experience. Remember to begin a new paragraph every time you change speakers.

    Use this link to review the rules for punctuating dialogue: http://fictionwriting.about.com/od/writingexercises/qt/punctuation.htm

    http://www.be-a-better-writer.com/punctuate-dialogue.html

    Use this link to review the guidelines for writing an effective description that includes dialogue:
    http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/narrative.htm

    Activity #6 (Use the discussion board in MCL)
    Post your thoughts about Body Art on the discussion board in MyCompLab. You must respond twice to earn 10 points. Each response must be at least three complete sentences and on-topic.





     

    Wednesday, August 22, 2012

    Syllabus

    Some of you were having difficulty getting the syllabus button to work on BlackBoard.  Use the copy below. It is the same.

    Syllabus English 101
    ESTRELLA MOUNTAIN COMMUNITY COLLEGE
    First – Year Composition – 3 Credit Hours – English 101
    Instructor: Mrs. Patricia Eaton
    Blog: www.eatonenglish101.blogspot.com (I use this to guide our work in class. You may find it helpful for review.)

    Adjunct Office: 623- 935-8139 in Montezuma Hall 119 (You may phone the office and leave a message for me between 8:00 am and 5:00 pm on weekdays. Papers may be left with Ms. Terri Propes or put into the night drop box after hours.)

    Required Text
    Write Now by Daniel Anderson You MUST have your own copy of the book and use the person code. The book is available in the campus bookstore.
    Note: This syllabus is subject to change based upon the progress of the class. Daily updates will be provided on the BLOG. If you miss a class, be sure to contact me by e-mail and ask for a copy of the daily information.
    Office Hours: By appointment – my schedule is flexible.
    Course Description
    (Prerequisite: English placement test score of a grade of “C” or better in English 071.)
    English 101 focuses on the development of writing skills through a process of thinking, researching, planning, writing, revising, editing, and reviewing expository essays. This course will require students to analyze and respond to text-based writing. Students will be responsible for writing a minimum of six critical essays to develop skills in textual analysis, written expression, and proper documentation. These essays will be word-processed and properly documented. In completing the required essays, students will demonstrate the ability to read difficult material with comprehension; to process information through quotation, summary, and paraphrase; and to integrate the ideas of others into their own sustained written examination of a subject.

    Course Competencies
    1. Analyze specific rhetorical contexts, including circumstance, purpose, topic, audience, and writer as well as the writing’s ethical, political, and cultural implications.
    2. Organize writing to support a central idea through unity, coherence, and logical development appropriate to a specific writing context.
    3. Use appropriate conventions in writing, including consistent voice, tone, diction, grammar, and mechanics.
    4. Summarize, paraphrase and quote from sources to maintain academic integrity and to develop and support one’s own ideas.
    5. Use feedback obtained from peer review, instructor comments and/or other resources to revise writing.
    6. Assess one’s own writing strengths and identify strategies for improvement through instructor conference, portfolio review, written evaluation, and/or other methods.
    7. Generate, format, and edit writing using appropriate technologies.
    Abilities: Critical thinking and effective communication have been identified as essential to student success and will be integrated into this course. Critical thinking is defined as the ability to identify a problem, develop and implement strategies, evaluate information, reach conclusion, and respond to a problem. Effective communication is defined as the ability to respond to an audience, demonstrate clear sense of purpose, organize information, and deliver information using appropriate language.
    Attendance Policy: Active participation is expected for successful completion in this course. In the event of an absence, students are expected to contact me by e-mail: Patricia.Eaton@estrellamountain.eduand go to www.eatonenglish101.blogspot.comfor daily updates for the course.
    Students are expected to complete any homework for the missed day by the next class period.
    Important FYI:
    Attendance policy (typically, students are allowed the number of unofficial absences according to the number of times a class meets per week; ex: TR, students are allowed one unofficial absences and may be dropped after that.)
    2.3.2 Attendance
    • Only persons who are registered for a class at any of the Maricopa Community Colleges may attend that class. Attendance requirements are determined by the course instructor. Students who do not meet the attendance requirement as determined by the course instructor may be withdrawn.
    • Students who fail to attend the first scheduled class meeting, or to contact the instructor regarding absence before the first scheduled class meeting may, at the option of the instructor, be withdrawn.
    • At the beginning of each course, each faculty member will provide students with written attendance requirements. It is the student's responsibility to consult with the instructor regarding official or unofficial absences. Absences begin to accumulate with the first scheduled class meeting.
    • Students bear the responsibility of notifying the Admissions and Records Office/Office of Student Enrollment Services when they discontinue studies in a course or at the college.
    Late Work: Make-ups of in-class writing assignments are at the instructor’s discretion. Students turning their work in after the due date may be penalized by having the grade lowered five points per day in fairness to those students who met the deadline.
    Tape Recordings and/or Video Recordings: In order to tape any class session, a student must first seek permission from the instructor. In order to tape group discussions, permission must be given by the instructor and the students in the group.
    Cell Phones: Cell phones must be turned off or placed on “vibrate” during class. At no time should a student be sending text messages, sending e-mails, listening to music, or carrying on conversations. In the event of an emergency call, please excuse yourself from the room, take care of the situation, and quietly return to class.
    Student Disabilities: If a student has a disability that requires special accommodations, please let me know as soon as possible. “Students with disabilities are encouraged to contact the DRS office at the beginning of the admissions process to discuss accommodation needs and to request an alternate format of printed materials. Some accommodation may require three to four weeks notification. For more information, call 623-935-8935 V?TTY, or contact the EMCC DRS office in Komatke Hall 119, or e-mail: Ramona.shingler@emcmail.maricopa.edu.”0 0 < /span>
    Student Support Services: For writing assistance in the Learning Enhancement Center, students should contact Susan Malmo, Writing Center Coordinator, at 623-935-8419. The Writing Center is located on the first floor of Estrella Hall.
    Grading Scale:
    See Blackboard Modules for points possible. (This is subject to change if I find that more practice is needed in some areas or if some skills are already known and used by the class.)
    A= 90-100%
    B=80-89%
    C=70-79%
    D=60-69%
    F=0-59%
    Plagiarism: Plagiarism is the process of borrowing information from other sources or individuals without giving credit. Plagiarism will not be tolerated. Essays will not be accepted unless accompanied by pre-writing exercises, notes, drafts, peer and self-editing marks, etc. This paper trail is proof of a student’s own work. Proof of plagiarism will result in a zero for the assignment.
    Classroom Misconduct: Students must read the “Code of Student Conduct” in the new Student Handbook for an understanding of what will be expected within the academic setting.
    2.3.11 Academic Misconduct
    1. Definitions
      1. Academic Misconduct - includes misconduct associated with the classroom, laboratory or clinical learning process. Examples of academic misconduct include, but are not limited to, cheating, plagiarism, excessive absences, use of abusive or profane language, and disruptive and/or threatening behavior.
      2. Cheating - includes, but is not limited to, (a) use of any unauthorized assistance in taking quizzes, tests, assessment tests or examinations; (b) dependence upon the aid of sources beyond those authorized by the faculty member in writing papers, preparing reports, solving problems, or carrying out other assignments; or (c) the acquisition, without permission, of tests or other academic material belonging to a member of the college faculty or staff.
      3. Plagiarism - includes, but is not limited to, the use of paraphrase or direct quotation of the published or unpublished work of another person without full and clear acknowledgment. It also includes the unacknowledged use of materials prepared by another person or agency engaged in the selling of term papers or other academic materials. Information gathered from the internet and not properly identified is also considered plagiarism.

    Final Thoughts: This course is designed to help you become a better writer, researcher, and reader. You will get out of the course what you put into it. You are expected to actively participate in readings, discussions, debates,on-line discussions, and reports. Come to class prepared with readings and with required writings and notes. Conduct thorough research. At all times, give credit to the source of information by using proper documentation. Be on time. Be positive. Ask questions. Contribute your thoughts. Be tolerant of others and of ideas that differ from your own.
    FYI: Exam schedule – please check the exam schedule at: http://www.estrellamountain.edu/academics/final-exam-schedule.

    Tuesday, August 21, 2012

    First Class

    August 21, 2012

    Welcome to English 101 - a course that is live and virtual! You get the best of both worlds.

    Required:  Write Now
    This must include YOUR registration code. You cannot complete the assignments without it. You need to have it by this afternoon. If the book is not available in the bookstore, you can purchase it on-line at the Pearson site.

    Class Work

    1. Introductions
    2. Getting around BlackBoard . . . don't give up!
    3. Syllabus Overview . . . click on the "syllabus" icon to view the syllabus.
    4. Review of assignments in the Orientation Module.
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    5. Who likes to write????? What was your best writing experience? What was your worst?
    (This discussion will help with the reflection paper in the Orientation module. It is due Thursday - posted in BlackBoard. )
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    6. Locating quotations about writing:
    http://www.quotegarden.com/writing.html

    http://www.quotationspage.com/subjects/writing/

    http://thinkexist.com/quotations/writing/

     Locate a quotation that sums up your personal opinion about writing. (This activity will help you with the Report Project in Module 1. It is due next Tuesday.
    7. Learn to use EasyBib . . . add the source information that goes with your quotation.

    www.easybib.com

    You are required to give credit to your sources on all papers.

    This first day covers technical aspects of the on-line course. You might get frustrated, but do not give up. I will check my e-mail every afternoon and do my best to answer your questions. 

    There will probably be many questions with the orientation unit. Bring those questions to class on Thursday and we will work on solutions together.

    Homework:  Complete the Orientation Module. Also, register for MyCompLab. You must do this in order to complete the orientation module.